The 24-Hour Truce of Lex Luthor

What follows, here, is a script I wrote in 1982, one of a set of four sample scripts that led to me getting professional work at DC. I’d interviewed Dick Giordano (then DC’s editor in chief) for a college term paper, and when I told him I had ambitions to be a writer, he invited me to send him some samples. I did, and he wound up passing them out to the editors of the books they were written for.

This particular script didn’t exactly lead to me getting work—it was written for the then-running backup series, “Superman: The In-Between Years,” which told stories of Superman’s college life. The Superman editor at the time was Julie Schwartz, and he gave it to his associate, E. Nelson Bridwell, to read. Nelson pronounced it “perfectly publishable, but.” The “but,” in this case, was that the “In-Between Years” backup series had ended, so they had no use for scripts for it. Ah well.

[One of the other scripts, though, was a FLASH script that editor Ernie Colon liked enough that, while he couldn’t use it for FLASH (Cary Bates was the regular writer and there was no need whatsoever of any fill-ins), he did invite me to pitch him ideas for “Tales of the Green Lantern Corps” backups. I did, he bought one, and that’s how I broke in.]

So why am I running this here? Because I realized, a few years back, that if I added a framing story and changed the characters in the script (some of them considerably), I could turn this into an ASTRO CITY story. Which I just did, and as I write this post, it’s just been published as ASTRO CITY 16, “Wish I May…”

I thought people might be interested in seeing what got saved and what got changed, or maybe just might want to see what my sample scripts looked like, when I was about to start my career. In any case, here’s this one. Hope you enjoy it.

Pardon the lousy quality. It’s scanned from Xeroxes of 32-year-old originals, and I can’t swear they weren’t typed on corrasable bond paper in the first place. But clicking on the pages will enlarge them, which should help.

And hey, if you’re seeing this before you’ve read ASTRO CITY 16, go get that and read it first, okay?

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The Past Is Never Dead…

“…it’s not even past.” —William Faulkner, Requiem For A Nun

Yesterday evening, I had an interesting Twitter back-and-forth with Patrick Zircher about the perils (and potential pleasures) of revisiting the past for stories. Which led me to a couple of thoughts:

When I was a beginning writer pitching fill-ins, Len Wein gave me some good advice. He said that as a beginning writer, I wasn’t going to be allowed to mess with the status quo, and I also wasn’t likely going to be privy to whatever was upcoming. So in writing a fill-in, it was a good idea to get the lead character away from his/her usual supporting cast and status quo. Swamp Thing could wander away from his friends, encounter someone, have a story and then his pals catch up, for instance. And bam, there’s an issue—if it’s an interesting story, it’ll satisfy readers, even though you haven’t moved the main story forward. And that’s one way to do it—separating the lead from the current status quo in space, in distance.

But time is a way to separate the character from his/her usual status quo, too. For instance, a Spider-Man story could start with Spidey weary and beleaguered from all he’s currently going through. He sees a spot—an abandoned restaurant? A particular set of waterfront docks?—that makes him think back to earlier days, when things were simpler. And we flash back to a story of those earlier days, as he remembers them, telling us the story of what happened on that spot. We get to see everyone younger, more innocent, but we also see that Spidey’s dilemmas were just as tough back then, his life just as beleaguered. He comes out of the flashback reinvigorated, thinking about how he always found a way then, and he’ll find a way now. Whether that would be a good story or not depends on what story you tell in that look back, but the principle of the past as a means of stepping away from the present for a clean separate story is a workable one.

Or let’s say you’re writing FANTASTIC FOUR and you want to lead up to a Dr. Doom story. You could start it in Reed and Ben’s college days, and see Ben as a BMOC, Reed as a brilliant hopeful, Doom as the potential friend who is too arrogant to unbend. And aside from whatever plot stuff you might want to plant, when you move to the present the reader will have experienced stuff that will give them a more immediate perspective of the Doom/Reed relationship, on Ben’s tragic loss of humanity, etc. See him as a rugged college chick magnet, and it makes his monstrous form all that much more of a burden, because we see the life he lost. By stepping into the past, you can make it come to life for new (and older) readers who never saw this stuff—or only saw it as summary. It’s a chance to show, to dramatize, things that for most readers have only been told.

An entire series of stories set in the past can give readers a portrait of change and growth over the years, something that didn’t get focused on when it was happening, because the concern was always “now.”

There are many ways to step aside from the norm for a different way to look at the series or the leads, and invoking the past is only one of them. But that doesn’t mean it can’t be useful, in various ways. The story of Clark Kent’s first day on the job, from Perry White’s point of view, may tell us a lot about Perry in a way that makes an interesting story. Even if we’ve already seen those events from Clark’s POV. Or Lois’s.

It’s like writing war fiction that revisits D-Day. The history may be established, but there are many stories to be told, seeing it from different angles. The story of Hiroshima is a different story if you follow the pilots of the Enola Gay or the scientists who invented the bomb hearing the news. Or people on the ground. Revisiting those events can support many new stories.

The fictional history of a comic book character may not be as stirring as D-Day or Hiroshima, but the principle is there. The human struggle can be experienced in many different ways.

A revisiting of past events can also modernize them. What may have been stilted or corny before can be made fresh to new audiences, or gain nuance and meaning from additional detail or new angles. For instance, it just strikes me now that I don’t think we ever met any of football hero Ben Grimm’s college girlfriends (Note: Turns out we did, back in an issue of THE THING), but surely there must have been some. What could you get out of meeting one of them, then seeing how her life has changed in contrast with how his has? Would that give us a new look at the man within the rocks?

“What happens next?” is the question that usually drives adventure comics. But it isn’t the only question to ask that gets you to a good story. Heck, in my career, most of my biggest successes have happened when I was asking a different question (often “What else happened?” or “And how did that feel, huh?”).

On Writing For Comics

25 years ago (ulp) I edited a project for Marvel called OPEN SPACE, a shared-universe science-fiction anthology written by established SF prose writers and drawn by comics artists. It didn’t last very long, but it was very enjoyable (and stressful) to do, and brought me in touch with talented people I’m still working with today, including Alex Ross and Richard Starkings.

Because I was working with writers who, for the most part, had never written comics before, I had to teach them. I didn’t have to teach them how to write a story, since they already had plenty of experience at that—I had to give them the basics of the comics format, so they knew what to think about in telling a story visually and writing a comics script.

So I wrote a memo about it, and sent it around. For years, that memo was on the ‘net, at a site that’s long been closed down, and I just now finally got around to putting the text up here rather than saying, “Hey, I should really do that someday.”

So here it is, for whatever interest it is to others. It’s pretty basic stuff, but I can remember a time when pretty basic stuff would have been very welcome to me, so it might be helpful to others. Plus, one of the writers who worked on OPEN SPACE, Garfield Reeves-Stevens, went on to write animation, and invited me at one point to write for a show he was story editing. I told him I didn’t know how to write for animation, and he told me, “Are you kidding? You’re the guy who taught me to write animation; it’s pretty much the same stuff you told us for OPEN SPACE.” So I must have done something right.

A couple of notes:

This was written in 1988, and comics have changed a lot since then. In the memo I make assumptions about static panels, hand-lettering and other things that would make people laugh today. But hey, take it for what it’s worth.

At the time this was written, the series was called AD ASTRA. By the time it came out it was called OPEN SPACE. To this day, Bob Wayne probably thinks we changed the name because he constantly referred to it as ED ASNER when we’d meet on the commuter train, but it was actually a trademark issue. Sorry, Bob.

At the end of the memo, it mentions a couple of attachments. These are, of course, not attached. But it wouldn’t hurt, if you’re interested, to get a copy of DAREDEVIL: BORN AGAIN to see how Frank Miller used the various techniques, and, since you don’t have the sample script I gave the OPEN SPACE writers, to get a copy of PANEL ONE, edited by Nat Gertler, which shows a variety of script by a variety of writers.

In the opening remarks, it says you can call me with any questions. If you really need to, please call me at the Marvel offices in the late 1980s. I’m sure I’ll be very helpful.

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A New Astro Citizen

Astro City_BanditThe news is breaking today that in ASTRO CITY 12, we’re going to have the first “guest artist” the book has ever had in its 19-year history: Graham Nolan, well-known for Batman, Skywolf, X-Men Forever, Hawkman and lots more, including stints on The Phantom and Rex Morgan, MD.

This is a big step for us—we’ve had pinups by other artists and Brent’s been inked and/or embellished by a few different names, but this is the first Astro City story that doesn’t feature his storytelling. We decided a while ago that it was something we needed to do, to keep the book monthly, but we didn’t want to just go out and get anyone. We wanted the right guy.

We spent, literally, years talking about possibilities. A Graham Nolan’s the right guy, as you can see from the story page below.

Graham and I did an interview or two about it. Check ’em out here and here.

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